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Staring through hollow eyes I watch her voluptuous shape move to the sound of an endless dance. The innocence in those eyes, radiant and colorful, damned to be stripped away by the hands of another in a single night of hasty motions and a slow harmonious dance. I take her hand, unwilling to let her be lost to me, even after but one night of passion and fiery romance I know not her name, but she is so familiar to me, like a portrait painted in years of cruel uncertainty. Holding her like a brother and a lover, a protector and a defiler, I refuse to undo my grasp, holding her like a precious trinket that was certain to tarnish over the years. All that held us was the fear of loss, of the darkness that had once shrouded us both during the winters of our lives. The coldness of my heart is healed by the warmth of her eyes, healing the gouges made by fates knife in years of untold pain. My epiphany, brought by the cold of her touch and the ethereal light that poured from my body as I revealed my soul in a single blinding flash of warm love which was preordained to fail, to be tossed aside as an old tool which grew obsolete. Like stones of sorrow which fall into the ocean to be lost forever, my love has left me on the moment that I revealed my truest form, the angelic spirit with a single bloodied horn, like the bride who decided it was too cold to be wed. That night, staring through these hollow empty eyes, I long for you, my nameless love.
©2005-2009 ~spazma
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Author's Comments

The result of a 6 month writers block, I'm not toally satisfied, but i never am.

Comments, crits, etc welcome and very appreciated :)

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:iconmypetskeletonx:
uh um so she was like naked right?

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Niah Niah lines rule!
I want to stick my nutsack in a gumball machine and.....TWIST!
:iconspazma:
She might have been. It's your choice. I'm a whore of that style, sorry.

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[link] <-my wee little gallery
~WeCritique
breathe in the peppermint winds of life and let your rancid fumes pour out.
:iconskycircles360:
I like this piece! It leaves a lot to the imagination, and that's good! =)

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Give it if you've got it, Get it if you don't
:iconspazma:
Thank you ^_^

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[link] <-my wee little gallery
~WeCritique
breathe in the peppermint winds of life and let your rancid fumes pour out.
:iconsapphirefox726:
Awesome job Matt! You described it so well. I missed your writings. Good to see ya back!

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*~Ya parece que me muero por estar sin ti...~*
:iconspazma:
Thanks, it's good to be back, -steffy- :)

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[link] <-my wee little gallery
~WeCritique
breathe in the peppermint winds of life and let your rancid fumes pour out.
:iconsapphirefox726:
Lol watch out. Don't abuse the use of the name, or I'll beat ya with a bat, lol. :hug: :threaten:

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*~Ya parece que me muero por estar sin ti...~*
:iconnckemp756:
Excellent piece matt o'malley. The description is incredible and so is the contrats between you and her. Favorited bud.

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"You don't have to understand a woman, all you have to do is love her"

" Those who say that we're in a time when there are no heros, they just don't know where to look." - Ronald Reagan
:iconlacomtesseblanche:
Nice to see you back, its been awhile. I really like this piece, especially the open style. Nice to see ya over your block...gotta hate those =P

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